Review Detail of Nihil_Est_Scriptor in 风风风

The writing quality is good, although there are some grammatical errors. There are also a point of view change from one character to another, which really confused me. There are also notes the Author added and just said, 'Says the narrator'. It was a bit confusing for me too and disturbed the flow of the story. The story is very capitating, it was able to keep my attention for the whole 5 chapters published. The character designs are also well done. The world background is interesting and well written. There are only 5 chapters currently, so I cant say anything about the story development, but I can see that it will be good. The pacing seems good and does not bore us. All in all, I think this book is a good read. Looking forward to more.