Review Detail of AzazelTriMagnus in Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill

I had read this story five times in the course of when it was still unfinished. I had re-read it thrice when it got completed. The whole story got carried out decently, assimilating the character into the story's lore. It was also one of the best Akame Ga Kill fanfic out there. The prologue was a tad unrealistic but was quite good as well. The pace was somewhat slow but gave it justice in many parts of the story. Interesting character development. I'll give the author that. However, there were more flaws than merits. There were too many grammatical errors, especially in prepositions and word choice, Dialogue tags got improperly utilized, and the vocabulary was too limited. There were many times wherein I couldn't immerse myself in a particular scene or fight. The bloody and ruthless atmosphere of the lore, which was what Akame Ga Kill is known for, was lackluster. The romance part of the story heavily influenced it, making it subpar. The story's development was lacking too, and it was easy to get disconnected from the characters. Such was the case with the MC, as his character development became disjointed in the middle part of the story. The original characters' (in Akame ga Kill) personalities were not consistent with their base personality (in the original work). Nevertheless, this story is a good read. I highly recommend this story for casual readers and not so much for critical readers. If you can ignore the typos and plotholes, this is for you. P.S. I get it that the author is substandard, but they must have improved, no? It has been a year since the story's completion. A revision is now up for the stands, even if it is only fanfic.