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thought it was rule43?
they meant 1 for every 1000. translator/author is just dumbđ¤Śââď¸
was about to say that, honestly.
The soverign actually didn't give advice. He just asked when Seong Jin-Woo was dying if he'd accept reality and become the sovereign or live in the illusion created and allow him to control his body.
ToG reference?
I hate it when stories have romance. We can't have everything đ¤ˇââď¸
I don't think she's a main... more like a primary side character, since he'll have more servants in the future.
Maybe they have a special energy signature that she recognizes, and as a result the system said as stated?
Well, he's more of a sociopath, considering it was caused by environmental factors.
I really hope he doesn't turn into some harem master. they're just disgusting.
They are. This is only the fantasy of the author.
How tf is something equivalent to a female Lucifer reading your mind every second not disturbing?
I think it'd be better if it were just like a terminal. The human-like speech just kind of ruins it, since it's not really a system and more like a consciousness helping you out.
3.8/5. The grammar isn't bad, but it can have some improvement. There's no need for commas after certain words. For example, in the beginning it says somewhere along the lines of, "Laid on the (something), was an unconscious boy." There is no need for the comma before was. Think of the sentence in your head, replacing the comma with a pause and see if it makes sense. There's also the fact that it's highly unlikely for time magic not to have been discovered yet. I won't delve too deeply into that, though. Also, you seem to use asterisks (*) instead of apostrophes ('). I don't know if it's a design choice, but it gets rather annoying. I usually only see those in poorly written fanfictions on AO3 and FF. I'd change it ASAP. Won't comment on the plot until the story progresses to at least chapter 50.