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Sorry, but this is just screaming of A.I to me, with reactions that just feel emotionless. I don't know what else to say other than I'll see if it gets better later on as I am only on chapter 5 but we'll see.
By not putting his line on the line?
Then there are two routes, the sect gives up on the family because A. they are too power or B. they don't product the average talent required for them, if not they just wipe out families like I believe they do later.
I always get confused about that, since he has such low cultivation, wouldn't it benefit him more to choose experience of that realm and his mastery of his moves. All webnovels do this for some reason, annoying as hell. You might have the realm but not the corresponding reaction or destructive martial arts.
In front of absolute power, fools turn into Gods, they are essentially untouchable, as if they are harmed by those who scheme the Golden Core Powerhouse would wipe out their family.
You know, this is an amazing fanfic, I wanna find something similar but can't for other series like hp and such.
This is just giving a major feeling of AI
Wouldn't that kill the person, as the more cells that are divided lower the lifespan of the creature. That or we are using nonsensical logic of another world.
For simply copying Pokémon Chronicles of freedom this get a one, you didn't even try to change anything beside change the words slightly. I know from comparing back to back
Tang Hao and Ah Yin?