I loved the way the author takes their time to describe each and every detail. At first it took me a while to immerse myself due to the heavy descriptions. However, it's worth a read!

yes, thank you

I would've, but I've run out of power stones.

Actually, I meant it gets confusing and hard to read for these three paragraphs.

This is where stuff got a bit complicated for me to fathom at first. Maybe it needs to be expanded? The backstory is a bit hard to understand after reading for the first time.

The first chapter definitely got me hooked. I hope that the author will continue to have this kind of intriguing quality for the rest of the novel. The second chapter was good as well. But I found some parts were slightly confusing.

This is a very emotional story. The characters are unique, and they behave like real people would, hence it's a realistic story. I have read another work from the same author, but I prefer this one. I feel that the author has done exceptionally well with this novel.

I was very impressed by the quality of the writing. It seems like a story I could read for hours. Well done. I hope to read more of it in the future,

I love vampire stories, and this one is so good.

Nice, I had fun reading the first chapter.