Honestly the only bad thing I could say about this is at the chapters are a little too short and the release time is a little bit slow other than that I really do like the fic

In irl games yes guilds are very vital and essential but in at least 90% of novels unless if the main character is the guild leader most of the time the main character gets stagnant in character development and power and the novel becomes very boring but in this case this is not one of them but in most cases it the MC gets dragged down because of the guild there in. that which really infuriates me

He's not dissatisfied with the fact that the main character shared his secrets he's dissatisfied as well as my about the mc shared his secrets to strangers that he met literally 2 minutes ago

There's already enough bed reviews on here so I'm going to talk about the things that I like about the story. I really like how his cheats doesn't make him overpowered right at the start it takes a while of grinding for him to start becoming overpowered compared to his peers Another thing I don't get is that there's a couple different people reviewing about his really good amount of luck not being used. LIKE WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT not only is he looking if to get the first Divine level weapon his cheat literally says one in a million to get the skill and he pretty much gets it right off the bat or just with a little bit of grinding if that isn't the luck coming into play I don't know what it is and people are also complaining about in combat his luck isn't taking place which in most video games the look stat if there is one is usually related to the drops/random encounters and usually never related to combat

Honestly I completely forgot that we were on a review to a Harry Potter fanfic thank you very much for making me laugh it was hilarious reading all your replies

Honestly this fic flushes out the world really good or give the world building and characters other than the MC five stars. it's a slow burner which isn't my cup of tea but it's not the main reason why I'm giving it such a lower score the power system seems pretty cool as well but one of my biggest pet peeves on any fic is basically plot based MC choices cuz he is forced to choose that path cuz either it's a life or death situation or he's basically a slave I absolutely hate that type of storyline to Force the MC to do certain direction or do certain tasks or missions. Cuz any fic with that kind of storyline basically completely disregards any form of character building for the MC whatsoever and anything the MC actually does is "forgiven" because he was forced to do it

For a translation this is actually pretty decent writing and grammar other than that there really isn't anything good going for this fic the MC is extremely lazy and unmotivated to do anything other than just to observe everything which is fine if you have the right pacing but this is written like a slow burner so turns extremely boring for at least 50 straight chapters and yet the worst part about it is most of it isn't even relevant to the plot of the fic you could have crammed all of the important parts in one chapter

Honestly everything is kind of okay the grammar the writing in the weigh the MC handles things are just okay they're not great but they're not terrible but one thing is terrible is how badly you write any of the fights it's just terrible writing other than the fights everything's okay although the story seems a little dull to me

To start off with the nerve the hell out of Dante which is an immediate red flag for me and on top of that he keeps taking L after L after L because his luck is apparently extremely abysmal that he keeps running into people that are stronger than him which wouldn't be the case in the first place if they didn't Nerf him to begin. Look I get it some people don't want to op character right at the start I but if you're going to give a character someone's powers better overpowered to begin with the Nerf them without giving a proper reason why they're nerfed and the top of that making it to where the main character can't actually win against anything but common thugs makes this whole series for me at least pretty terrible

I recently posted a review that had a lot of criticism in it and for good reason so the translator decides to delete it I'm going to keep posting this exact message until my post stops getting deleted. PS this is the third time I posted this message

I like to set up but the problem I have with it is that if you change the main characters personality and the way he reacts to situations considering that you're obviously forcing your personality on the main character so why don't you just write your own si cuz it's basically what you're doing to this one

Not my cup of tea I'm just not really interested in the fan fiction we're the main character is way under the age to the point where they literally can't have romantic urges but they do anyway it just infuriates me

You literally made an entire chapter about a the main character not wanting to bow down to any authority and I'm not even exaggerating the very next chapter he bows down and accepts to be a shield agent made me drop the fic entirely

Just start off with the most annoying thing the I find is a person or system that annoys the living crap out of the main character it is one of my biggest pet peeves and on top of that Alice has absolutely nothing to do with the plot you could literally take it out and there wouldn't be anything changed so basically making the novel 100 times better without even putting much effort in

I really love the world background that is set up and the power system is also pretty cool from what I've seen so far but one of my biggest pet peeves in pretty much any story I read is the story having a crap ton of scheming against the main character at basically chapter one. I don't know why but it rubs me the wrong way every single time I start one of these novels and I have to read people scheming against the MC constantly throughout the whole story from start to end and I understand if it's after the world background and the world's power system/scaling is set up then I find it understandable cuz then I know the main character and the people around him but novels like this It straight up feels like I got thrown directly in chapter 52 of a book I just started reading and to me it is really infuriating

Pretty good overall but the one thing I hate about it the most is the constant jumping back and forth between what is happening and what was happening and it's confusing as hell whenever you're thrust into the middle of a story without knowing what's going on until near the end and then it backtracks saying 5 days ago should have started it 5 days ago instead of starting in the middle of the story

Story is decent at the very least it's the MC that gets on my nerves because he is very erratic if he has goals he never goes for it because family is in the way and the main thing that aggravated me that he knew that there were a lot of people that use legitimants and never actually learned Occlumency. Like Bro if you know you're going to get mind raped why the hell are you not putting up mind shields so in the end the character is pretty stupid and I really just couldn't read past chapter 40 cuz it was terrible

Everything is okay except for the fact that the MC is WWAAAAAYYYY too horny there ain't no way a 5-year-old is going to be that way even if reincarnated

For starters I don't hate nationalism but whenever it was just pushed into the story like that it was terrible not to mention that the MC has been racist multiple times the amount of money the main character has earned from the cross ranking kills has been inconsistent at the best like literally at the end of one fight scene in The abyss it literally stated that he has earned 4.4 million points and then when he gets back up to Earth apparently he only has 1.2 million bro you shouldn't even be making a LN if your memory is this bad

The setup was so perfect. The was supposed to be a apocalyptic event we're the MC was supposed to be powerful by himself with luck and a crap ton of determination turned into a romance novel I mean at that specific point you might as well not even use the apocalyptic world setup and be upfront on what kind of novel you want to set up cuz it ended up being pretty bad in my opinion. I 100% would not suggest this to anyone unless they're interested in a romance novel with an apocalyptic background