Story is decent at the very least it's the MC that gets on my nerves because he is very erratic if he has goals he never goes for it because family is in the way and the main thing that aggravated me that he knew that there were a lot of people that use legitimants and never actually learned Occlumency. Like Bro if you know you're going to get mind raped why the hell are you not putting up mind shields so in the end the character is pretty stupid and I really just couldn't read past chapter 40 cuz it was terrible
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