I'm surprised aedan didn't mention he would probably be dead if not for Harry. The baby hp vanquishing voldy event is what got him out of that dungeon.

The mc is 5 years old and doing all this? Even if his mind is older the physical body would have just gave in and died at this point.

I'm liking the story, but having thena as a love interest is weird for me. Mainly because you said she looks like Angelina jolie, who is 47 in the real world and imo looks like a banshee.

Fake this fake that geez. Another edgy sociopathic mc from yours truly

I'll probably read this to completion just because I like the premise, but why do you need to make all your mc's so detached from their families and stuff?

Still don't like that Tsunade is a harem member. Never really liked her as a character and even though age doesn't really matter in this fic it's still weird that she's like 15 years older than them. Don't even get me started on mei... Borderline pedophile and basically grooming. Disgusting

"obviously" smiling? You mean "obliviously" smiling?

Mild thing that peeved me: teacher clearly said to THROW the ball, just because the teacher didn't say kicking wasnt allowed doesn't overrule the first order. Stupid small plot device to make mc look cool. Lame

Why exactly is a normal dude who had a family acting like a psychopath???

Do you even proofread chapters? It's "Gacha", not "gotcha". Gotcha is slang for "I got you" a "gacha" is a fucking noun/adjective for christs sake.

I like the premise of the story but there are several things that really degrade the quality of it. The dialogue and internal thoughts aren't always fluid. For example, you need to know when it's appropriate to use "can not" versus "can't" in certain thoughts/dialogue based off the context. The most glaring issue is the bullshit power ups the mc gets. Maybe that's how this story is supposed to be but Im sick and tired of stupidly overpowered mc's, especially if they get powerful so quickly. The mc gets strong enough to stand against iroh (not defeat) within like a week.

The story is interesting, but isn't he powering up way too fast? I haven't read the other stories by this author so idk if this is the norm for his MC's.

What exactly would he do if someone actually believes his "past life story" and kidnaps him???

Ugh liking cats and liking khajits are two different things. One is normal and one is a disgusting furry that should be burned at the stake.

It's weird that mc would just put the "save if possible" in the guidebook. How is he supposed to explain how he knew Karin would be in trouble? Or even know her name?

When did Asuma have siblings?

How does mei hold one of his hands while his arms are folded? Yeah it's possible but physically awkward.

This Luna is adorable

I ship the potter princess with mc, no particularly reason.

The saying is "you gotta risk it for the biscuit"... Not "no risk it no biscuit"...