Review Detail of naughty_boi in Avatar: Awakened Gamer

I like the premise of the story but there are several things that really degrade the quality of it. The dialogue and internal thoughts aren't always fluid. For example, you need to know when it's appropriate to use "can not" versus "can't" in certain thoughts/dialogue based off the context. The most glaring issue is the bullshit power ups the mc gets. Maybe that's how this story is supposed to be but Im sick and tired of stupidly overpowered mc's, especially if they get powerful so quickly. The mc gets strong enough to stand against iroh (not defeat) within like a week.