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constructive criticism: less descriptive words too many is bad and so is too little, still so far this seems good
the author is incredibly descriptive without spending 15 chapters describing what a single object looks like. the way the main character changes his mental state so slowley you sometimes dont even notice it till its brought up is very similar to how it might be in real life. ithas a unique setting and the way the whole thing is written is immaculate! for this book to be on this site is pure luck. it reminds me of fantasy books from world renown authors i used to read years ago, ive been on the search for another great book! i recommend to all who truly enjoy a true novel to read this.
my boy it was a jimmy neutron reference
another thing, im commenting it here but itsabout other parts of the book. $ comes before the number not after. 100 dollars isnt 100$ its $100
Obviously, because it will be an amazing thing not just a good thing!
i suggest that, currently deeper into the book and its definently not a kingdom build ill tell u that much.
did u continue or never try again cause last time i checked for once this is a decent kingdom building novel, this is coming from a person who dislikes them too
does this mean his base vitality is16 but othernes items add bonus?