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Writing quality /3stars updating stability. /3stars story development/0stars character design. /1stars World background/0stars Overall the quality story background everything just goes downhill and gets progressively worse and worse and worse and obviously the offer does not take any criticism or advice from comments to improve his story and has gotten to the point where he has no one reading his story
your not dealing with the average slug man anymore freezer