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I'm going to go ahead and give this a rating honestly it's pretty good good premise for the story unfortunately it hasn't gotten far enough in the story to catch up with Cannon but from what I've read it's pretty good

It's just a badly written rehash of the Canon timeline there's literally not a single change other than the fat Goku might have Bulma as his wife that that's literally it it's literally worse than the original story it completely follows Canada it's not even a change he's just ass fucking weak as an original story absolute garbage fan fake not worth reading

I’m sorry but to me the story was a major let down I thought this was going to be good but I find myself lose interest and even annoyed at like chapter 5 when he was talking to vegeta

Hot garbage...................1100000000000000000000000000000000000000⁰000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

absolutely garbage literally first chapter the OC becomes a Slave his power literally amounts to absolutely nothing the worst fucking story I have found in the past year

this isn't patreon stop advertising your fucking stupid shit here it is always trash and always be trash

.... author has no concept of what a story should be plot wise

I'd like to give a better review I really would but the grammar is so physically bad I felt like I had a fucking stroke reading the first chapter

so poor riding at best couldn't even get past the fucking first five chapters it's so bad

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