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If I can see the problems in my homeland, I can see the problems in yours. Worlds not perfect, stop making it worse shouldn't be asking to much. If it is don't cry when the public shames you.
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Finally finished this with fast passes! No alt accounts, just three chapters a day! Was it worth it? Unfortunately all feelings pointing to kind of. A great start a middle with so much potential followed by a slow death as all that is wrapped up as quickly as possible. The loose ends just keep happening and only the bare minimum is brought to any conclusion. The Link/Celine romance felt genuine and meaningful and as soon as it was consummated it's done. Link moves right on to the next lady without a thought, and the next, and the next. Most characters are flat out ignored, greatest swordsman in the north? No matter lets focus on getting that dragon queen poon, mercenary company's members? Only when it's convenient to get some named fodder people will recognize. The reviews called it and I didn't listen, the end is horribly rushed and full of plot holes. What drove the story was it's own undoing, the bad guy coming just left so much left aside nothing was done and it pulled open plot holes you could drive a truck thru. A great story pulled into mediocrity.
Gotta love it when a plan comes together! Got a little ISSTH vibes from this chapter. Thanks for sharing.
Honestly getting unnerved this comment has gotten so many thumbs up. But if the recognition is sympathy with names that can be used to bully people, I know this pain myself, then I hope others will be more thoughtful of what the name their children.
They almost all always are. The real wonder is others stories have tried the overbearing MC'S and the story suffers just the same. I'd say it's like this, Harry Potter focused on overall character development, but only glimpses of magic, and became world renowned. Could it have focused on magic first? Of course not, it wouldn't work to have the big villain just show up and get stomped, the characters and organizations with ties formed a web making an entire series. Here everything is just assumed the reader knows how it all works in this world, so why bother fleshing it out. But it makes jack all for sense then so we get lame villain exposition before an inevitable defeat by Bond...I mean the MC.