is just cait from what i know and maybe zoe

Is kinda upsetting when authors exagerate the rarity of things to this levels, like come on, 10 yrs, billions of people living of this game and you only have 4 legendary items??? I bet that the mc at some point where there are no other legendary, he will have 2. OMG what rare thing

Bro, punisher never takes any interest for himself when he kills the gangsters, If revenge can be called interest or sth that he benefit than you right, but i dont think it can

Kinda nerf the zombies

Quite anticlimatic

Your obsession with speed is too much, akaoiji and akainu are admirals at the same lvl with kizaru, whose attacks are light speed lvl, so they can survive that speed with haki, also, luffy reacted to the laser beam which is close to light speed i think with haki

How can he make portale, i think i missed the part where he learns it

First rate from the autor of course, hehe. I will come back after more chapters with a review, hope you guys can advice me. Thanks for the read.

Always hate this part in the story where mc finds out he is a frog in the well and awe at everything, u chose basically to write about the biggest academy in the whole verse so it maybe to much for some readers, u now need to introduce a lot of infodump and force mc to cool down to a "weak-to-strong" type. Be carefull how you write to not lose the readers, the story was very good at keep you up, but now you are at risk of how much new things you are gonna introduce. NOW READ THIS, BE CAREFUL NOT TO LOSE MUCH OF MC GLOW, TILL NOW YOU INTRODUCES HIM AS OP OR AT LEAST FAST-CULTIVATION AND IS ONE OF THE PLUS FOR THE STORY, I UNDERSTAND THAT YOU WILL NEED TO COOL HIM DOWN, TO SHOW HIM THE BIG WORLD, BUT DONT LOSE THOSE ELEMENTS. PLEASE BE CAREFUL, I LIKE THIS STORY AND I WOULDNT WANT TO LOSE IT FOR SOME MISTAKES. See ya next chapter :)

Dont forget at cons that is also a typical cliche slapfacing and lookind down hard as hell on the mc for no good reason and just to show lately that mc is strong and all be like "OMG IMPOSSIBLE"

Fav fantasy novel at this time, i love the way the mc is op, like the cheat you gave him is very intersting and also is op like how reasonable is all the rush, not some dumb luck or sth. I am reffering to how his power is sth from upperworlds in the lowerworld, like there are some novels with reincarnation where the mc comes with x methods all powerful and mystical, ready to take over the world and go back to the upperworlds, but still takes years or an unreasonable nr of chapter bcs some cliches. I wrote to much BS there but for short, what i mean is you have a very good and specific writing, like no additonal words to make an arc or a phase longer for nothing, like some bjg trending novels out there where a scene or an action is overexplained in couple of paragraphs or chapter LOVE IT AND KEEP GOING.

You should really stop to put status at the start and end of the chapter, or make it shorter, is annoying, ugly and suggest your laziness (added there just to complete your number of words)

The synopsis is no good, you practically spoils the reader, create a background of enterily sth else u write, even put reincarcation in tags for what. Is like we can skip all the story to the part of reincarnation and boom nothing is affected except some mc changes or shit, everything is restarting (kind off u start writing the past life of an mc reincarnated like the great thief, the strongest sword god, and continue with the story in the actual novel) and if somehow the situation in synopsis changes, u choosed a wrong hook for the readers and is returning back to you with negative feelings. Not talking about how bad the mc is in the start

It feels sour to read in everytime how low class swordman is, like come on, in other novels is a good class, even in real life is a first option for many, a fantasy, why use this element just to make the mc pityful and then when he is on high ground all to be "omg he is a swordman, the shittiest class but look at him he is so good, omg my idol / he is a swordman and is so good=1st tester so guys" RUUUN DONT PROVOKE HIM, HE IS GONMA KILL US ALL". Kind off meh

I love this novel, but sometimes is annoying how many "mistyrios characters" appears and considers themselves as "all knowing" in front of mc who really knows everything in terms of cultivation and this just bcs how the background for the game is

Good novel, but sometimes i cant think but to believe that these authors that put such a low paywall think of themselves to be reincarnated in the past where they know what sells and what not. Too bad

This chapter is like a punch in the face and a kick in the balls at the same time, that forced is the situation in the story

I understand what u want but maaan, i have to say it, to forced, more forced than the force skill, like based on the skills u showed he have he could kill her easly with an illusion (i remember it work perfectly well in 10 lev div - /+ so dont say it couldnt), like i understand what you want but u know how it felt? Instant K.O, like i was there immerse in the story, everything going well, i am on with the mc, i feel him, but then when she said that about u are weak, dont use skills etc it was like my soul flied away from your story, i even closed it, a little more i would throw my phone. Too forced, is hsrd to get a reader back in the story once u get him out, i say it as an advice, too many novels stay low bcs the reader cant feel the story anymore bcs forced situation (just to go well with the idea or story), it has to be sth more realistic, more touching.

Lvl 2 in one year seems off

Immortality like aging is theoretically possible