Great characters. Nice plot and a definite improvement in the quality of writing since the first chapter but it feels like the story is starting to get bogged down with all the angst. Also, the dream power is far too OP. I hope the story will be balanced out with just as OP villains. I would also recommend NOT to play too much into the yandere sweet girl trope, mostly because it reduces your options of how the MC will react in the future. Anyways, the best point is certainly the very real "feel" of the characters. Keep up the good work and great story.

Pretty brilliant story. You've definitely got me hooked. Hela's growth is quite realistic and not at all OP, something which is a definite plus. I look forward to the reaction of Frigga when she learns of Hela's part in battle. However, it is somewhat strange that the other warriors are underestimating Hela that much. I mean the Valkyrie are a huge part of what makes them famous. Anyways, please keep up the updates and quality of work.