Review Detail of Abhishek_Jhurry in Queen of the Castaway Isle

Great characters. Nice plot and a definite improvement in the quality of writing since the first chapter but it feels like the story is starting to get bogged down with all the angst. Also, the dream power is far too OP. I hope the story will be balanced out with just as OP villains. I would also recommend NOT to play too much into the yandere sweet girl trope, mostly because it reduces your options of how the MC will react in the future. Anyways, the best point is certainly the very real "feel" of the characters. Keep up the good work and great story.