See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Finally à good fanfic with a perfect ending.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

why is mc useless ? it's annoying

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

honestly book is very good but u skipping a lot of stuff and not moving in a stable way..i like the getting strong quick but it also feels like he's not getting stronger either..and after u know it something else happens

no marvel, and please don't add things like new type of magic or ancient evil character it spoils the fun..messing with characters is fine tho and a bit of plot twists but not too much..am rooting for author, so far so good..keep it up

waste of wishes honestly..but let's see how it goes

finally an Indian mc and good grammar so far author

good story author but you forget this is your fanfic u can do whatever you want with the story although I'm unhappy with some things but i like it, let's see where this goes..u got my vote

screw em as long as the book is good no one cares

new character with his mother's fruit, gotta be a hot chick tsunade level

it's good but too slow

yea..ran out of names?🤣

felicia hardy

screw the haters..good job author, keep going

imagine what it would be like to have knocking technique+ gura gura no mi man that would be way too overpowered