you already described a good way to get him to join. Break his will. completely and utterly clap his cheeks to the point his entire world view is shattered, then pick up the pieces when he joins the crew.

I'm glad I found this story. I appreciate your work.

I read chapter 1. I then exited the page and found 9 more. so I read them exited chapter 10 to find 11 more idk if I should read and be happy or read and be wary.

particle style should hurt him and kill him if it catches all of him. Lava style should hurt him. Rember that Pakara is either to be born or is alive already and she has scorch style which should be effective against his elementization

wasn't his father maekar? making daeron the 2nd his grandfather?

that was a pretty good twist. gave me Sherlock vibes.

it's a pretty entertaining info dump. the unable to reproduce with twileks thing is kinda confusing. I mean that one clone did in the clone wars show. unless this is part of your AU and if so, cool.

nope

change the weapons for weaponized gauntlets. or the weapons are for his future party members. or scrap the idea and send him to battle naked I guess.

It's a very OP start. it a good idea. Sub zero powers in naruto fits the whole shinobi thing. I like the story well enough. Other then the superfast build up its not bad. so ima keep reading it.

drop the twins on him

I'm impressed.

number 2. and I think that's the easiest conversion. unless galleons aren't solid gold or the size difference is to much. but its fiction and that would be more works than it's worth to find out. end of the day you're the author so do what you think is best.

I hope you can make regular updates. I think this story has potential. Chapters are short but I still enjoyed them alot.

you get a power stone for those bounties

went from 5 chapters to 2. I liked the danmachi story. first I thought it was good paced. soon leading up to a quick timeskip no jutsu

I like this story alot. I just wonder when he'll get his elemental kenki genki training. also I honestly hope Sasuke doesn't get with Sakura. literally a waste. he should get with someone who has a lightning or fire affinity. or multiple people who have either affinity. he'll even karin would be a better choice of Sasuke.

I think 14-19 page chapters are pretty good. that in a large font size since I like to read bigger words. all and all see like a pretty good bloodline. kinda like sage body with boosted senses. I like it. keep up the good work.

its all good I just started reading it today and didn't get the notice. confused the h*ll outta me though. every time I tried to reload it something else got deleted.

the synopsis just changed.