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Small criticism: With VR novels or other novels with a status screen I feel like authors have a tendency to paste the entire status bar with updates to show progression, but it ends up feeling jarring and becoming a massive text wall that I have to scroll through every chapter. I feel like this used to happen ALOT back when the video game isekai genre started becoming hot, and am surprised your novel shares the trait. Not sure if anyone else feels the same way..
Evil Shameless Immortal, commit to the sacred oath you once broke and return to the realm of Sacred Blessing! With the modern day pandemic, stories such as these fit perfectly with the times! This is your chance to rise up, and amass a huge following of power immortals! I swear these days... you spend more time tabulating the newest power immortals than writing your story 😡😡😡
I think it’s pushing it a bit to call world domination inherently racist. Risk is a really popular board game but no one ever called the end winner racist because all the soldiers at the final board state are a single color. If anything it would be nationalist, but even using this form of descriptor is pushing it a bit since world domination is not an inherent evil. Even absolute governments like monarchies are not inherently evil, it’s just that they can become evil a lot easier than other ruling systems due to fewer checks and balances. While I would like fresh nations to start out with, I think the main reason authors keep the original nations is that it’s easier to use real history than to create lore, spend a lot of time explaining lore, and then realize it’s not even that important since the MC took over that country eventually.