Samuel_Batista

yes

Well, Author by the way is maybe a beginner, since you simply accelerated things a lot, there was no development of love and feelings between the characters they just decided to 'date' out of nowhere but apart from that the story has great potential for development, thank you .

Author, A tip that I recommend is to shorten the paragraphs a little for better reading, thank you. (I'm translating)

Simply a good work and fun to read, for sure 5 stars easy, please keep it up, Thank you. ..................................................................................................................................................

Primeiro autor brasileiro que vejo finalmente alguém do Brasil kkkkkk

Dropped

Trap?

i watched dbz and the weakest of the gods of destruction are strong enough in a fight can destroy the universe

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thank