Review Detail of Godack in Reborn as a celestial in marvel

Writing quality 2* : It feels like it is written like how a chinese novel is written only with worse grammer. Stability of updates 2* : There is no stability of updates as they are randomly posted, 2* are given because the time between chapters isn't very long. (There are a dozen or so chapters that is just spam that add nothing to the story which makes the rating drop.) Stroy development 1* : It is all over the place and the bad grammer doesn't make it easier to follow, the story premise itself is okay. (The author said he didn't want his main character to be too OP but that's just bullshit as the main character is very OP, immortal/time control/creating life are just few of the main characters abilities) Character Design 1* : Due to the way the author writes it feels as if the characters are robots who are given pre-uploaded personalities. World background 3* : I gave 3* because it's marvel but nothing else particularly stood out to me that the author added himself that improved an already existing story. Total score : 1.8 My review may be harsh even though I liked reading it as everything that has something to do with marvel exites me, it's just very badly executed. I hope you improve your writing capabilities along the way. (This is in no way to discurage the author for writing.)