Kiyaji
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This novel has great potential- it has an interesting and engaging concept, and the depth of narration pulls you in. There are errors in grammar and punctuation; I suggest that the author proofread and take their time to ensure a better flow of sentences. I'll keep an eye on this novel; I'm excited to see how it progresses, and I'm looking forward to future updates!