Kiyaji

Interesting characters and nice pacing! I love to see the improvement in writing with each chapter. Easy to follow along. Keep it the good work!

I'm not typically one for the harem genre, but this one pulled me in. An interesting concept, and I love the added system! The writing flows really well, and there's a nice balance between dialogue and narration.

It's interesting to see how the author improves with each chapter! I like the dialogue, but I'd also love to see more narration and detail. Excited to see how the story progresses! Keep it up :)

This novel has great potential- it has an interesting and engaging concept, and the depth of narration pulls you in. There are errors in grammar and punctuation; I suggest that the author proofread and take their time to ensure a better flow of sentences. I'll keep an eye on this novel; I'm excited to see how it progresses, and I'm looking forward to future updates!

The author has a very strong narrative voice, and I like the balance of conversation. Nice long chapters and an interesting concept that pulls you in to read more! I can't wait to read future updates!

Very interesting read, it's nice to see how the story progresses and i'm interested in reading more! Dialogue is fun and the whole story is captivating