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First things first. This story is simple amazing. I read fanfictions for more than 10 yeras and this one is one of the best if not the best one i read. Every part of this story from big things to small details is well amazing XD. I can only say that i'm waiting for more and more. You did bloody good job with it Author:D
Author began really good but farther in to the story then worse. MC got strong in good pace and slowly became OP but each time Author find some way to nerf him and after chapter 89 i had enough of that and stopped reading. Beacause if you plan to make MC strong and OP what's the point in nerfing him/her?? Just make him grow in slower Tempo and not finding later how to make him weaker in one or other way. So sorry but that's MY reasons for low rate of this story.
I like your story very much. One of the big pluses is that you focus not only on Alyssia's adventures and development, but also on other characters showing how they develop. Another is the background of the world. I've read a lot of one-piece stories and most of them focus on Luffy and his crew, with some variations. The OCs most of the time join Luffy and follow Canon, showing little new stuff. Few of the ones that make their own path were so badly written that they were simply unreadable, and the ones that were really good were abandoned. So i gave my thanks to the Author for writing this story. I hope you will continue this until the end. Of course 5 stars from me. 😊