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Interesting concept btw
I think you could bring the cubs into his world or find some place where he can hide them and let them grow while he looks after them from time to time, would add something like a mother figure to his persona, plus from the critic above (or below) you need to add some feelings maybe not remake previous chapters but it seems like you have to add them from now on. Abgesehen davon hast du bisher gezeigt dass du das kannst also wirst du das auch noch hinbekommen
I actually can't understand why people would want to write death threats and shit because of a fanfic i guess they are too blinded by their own feelings about every character that they go and write such stuff. Besides that i watch/ed the anime and dont have any problems with ur fanfic. Keep up