Alright, this is for the prospective readers out there who are interested in giving this book a shot. What I really admired with this book and the author is the creation of his world-building, a lot of things would scale up and gets larger as the book's plot progresses. I think the most striking protagonist is Miguel not Argus, but since both of them seems to be crucial in the development of the whole story, I think what I have interpreted so far is that Miguel and Argus is both the protagonist while there would be a villain that they go against. The latest chapters are foreshadowing this I am currently at Chapter 163. The author is very subtle about it and I think it would be the Aghorans but I wasn't so sure about it yet. About the character development, I can see the growth of Argus by him being taught by Miguel. I like how the Author combines the magical or supernatural elements of this book with the ordinary wars. Culture and traditions play a major aspect in this book. since the author is a Filipino I can say that it is based in the Philippines before the Spanish invasion. The thing that would make you want to keep reading this book is the constant guessing of what would happen next because truthfully, I cannot guess it quite well. There are some syntax and preposition mistakes but that is almost negligible and you can fully immerse yourself with the story if you are not so mindful of those. The potential of this book could've been great, but we know well what is popular right now, systems and cultivation, as of now I can see some signs that magic would also play a key role in the progress of the story. Over-all it is a nice read! Do not be dissuaded just because there are 2 MCs in this book. Well, let me guess Author? Perhaps you are either planning to separate the two or make them merge together because if that is where you plan on making it, that would really be cool!!! Thank you for giving us this book and please continue writing this book, do not drop it! That is all that I want to say, maybe as you give us more chapters I will update my review.

me too count me in! keep writin, eventually you'll gather more readers.

perhaps he is skimming it. maybe you missed some of the details. I also do this occasionally. I'm a fan of kingdom building usually it is slow paced so i can understand ur sentiment. anyway am here for the Filipino stuff was curious how he portrays our culture here and am amazed everytime. keep it up author!

wow that story is like from the greek

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MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!

deshou

agreed to what he says, give us a bonus chapter author san!

what a cliffhanger! more chapters, please!

exp

I've been voting you with power stone. liked how you narrate the story in different perspectives

its like a gathering of fellow filipinos

Aen, Talto, Malpi its like buck, rocket, and Maurice from the planet of the apes... Are they gonna be Miguel's royal guards too? well, considering that Talto would survive.

why Maharlika tho?