Review Detail of Sun23 in The Heart of Gaia

The story was greatly thought out and planned. From the beginning to the latest chapter, whoo, this was an emotional reading! I love the main character, his display of emotional distress for his father was so damn realistic! I love the details and actions. They were describe with great imagery. But, there are a few sentences that doesn't flow as well as others. Maybe reword those sentences a bit for a better reading flow. But nonetheless, it's not a big issue. Since, I'm reading on a desktop, the reading format might be different. But I think the sentences were cluster a bit too close. Maybe space the sentences or paragraphs a bit farther. Beside is the amount of characters shown. There's not a lot, but more than enough to make me go back, and find out who these characters are again, aside from Knoxx. I hope the author at least give a short or make a chapter telling us reader who those characters are. I mean I did saw the author message at the end of each chapters which was really helpful. But I feel like some characters deserve a description of who they are, unless the author is withholding those details for later. In overall, this is a great story. With hidden mysteries awaiting to be uncover, because this book will take reader through an adventurous rollercoaster!