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crazyhairguy1mthCommented"and Lith"
"I've struggled so much, spent so much effort, and for what? I've wasted years of my life and argued with some of my best friends and Lith for nothing."- crazyhairguy7mthCommentedCh 2656 Taken (Part 2)
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He dreams of his clan being exterminated?
The High Chancellor was now aware that Qisal Voidfeather didn't exist. There was only Lith Tiamat Verhen, the Divine Beast that Mogar had chosen to deliver M'Rael everything he had ever dreamt of. - crazyhairguy7mthCommented
Wow. Just wow
"All we have to do is keep his wife unconscious to have unlimited access to Origin Flames, enchanted metals, and more crystals than we'll ever need. Once we are done with him, we can always sell him to one of his enemies. - crazyhairguy1yrCommented
Wut
"I wish we never met. You'd probably be living a normal, happy life." - crazyhairguy1yrPosted
Story development is good but slightly slow paced. Filters are alright when interesting but this work contains far too descriptive sentences that make you feel that the author thinks of you as having the intelligence of a 6 year old, thus making repetitive pointless statements whose only function would be to increase word count, forgivable. Grammar is passable. Characters are extremely shallow and frustratingly predictable. Typical OP MC troupe
- crazyhairguy1yrReplied to mcniclick
He's not a reincarnate. Just a hybrid child on whom Manohar cast a mind link when he was just a foetus. Was implanted with a suggestion that made him giggle whenever Manohar's name was called out. Confirmed by legion
"Let's see how many people are left on the list." He took out a piece of paper with the names of those he had sent a Balkor card to. "Marth never gets out of the academy. Maybe I could target his wife and his half-breed son. - crazyhairguy1yrCommented
Ouch
"You left that part out from your sob story, didn't you?" Kamila said in mock outrage. "Tomorrow you have to tell me everything. Right now, I just want you to know that I'm a bit less on the Friya side and more on the Phloria side now." - crazyhairguy1yrCommented
FIGHT!!!!
"Are you going to be our uncle for real now?" Filia asked while looking at Leria in defiance. - crazyhairguy1yrReplied to Lukas_Kmitas
She already had another bun in the oven. Then she found out about birth control spells. Then she lost it
"Elina, don't you think that you can get rid of me so easily. Not with another bun in the oven." The huntress chuckled. - crazyhairguy2yrCommented
Technically, he didn't lose. Manohar's death was an elaborate form of suicide - either he survived by awakening or he didn't, he died on his own terms
"Please, don't make your death pointless, and don't let that asshole of Meln win. You never lose, remember?" The Master begged. - crazyhairguy2yrCommented
And you talk too much
"I remember this spell." Orpal shrugged. "You used this very same spell against a previous host. It failed then and it will fail now. You are nothing without Balkor!" - crazyhairguy2yrCommented
Weren't all of those with Royal blood supposed to have Tyris's silver eyes?
She was a young woman, 20 years old, about 1.58 (5'2") tall. She had blonde hair streaked silver, black, and blue all over. Her blue eyes and Tyris' blood smoothened the sharp features she had inherited from her mother. - crazyhairguy2yrCommented
An unsettling foreboding
'You are welcome.' The sudden reply made him think that either the stress was driving him insane or that Tyrants had bloodline abilities aside from Domination.