Review Detail of crazyhairguy in Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Story development is good but slightly slow paced. Filters are alright when interesting but this work contains far too descriptive sentences that make you feel that the author thinks of you as having the intelligence of a 6 year old, thus making repetitive pointless statements whose only function would be to increase word count, forgivable. Grammar is passable. Characters are extremely shallow and frustratingly predictable. Typical OP MC troupe