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Review Detail of Garang_Kuol in Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

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It’s an okay story overall but I don’t really like the MC that much I get it the authors trying to show him as some unhinged and broken person trying to be analytical and trying to convince himself things by having him talk to himself but in the later part the entire thing becomes like 60% just monologue and exposition, and that would be okay if it wasn’t so redundant and so often. It’s like ‘I WILL BE IMMORTAL’ or ‘I WILL BE A GOD’ or something like that or something long drawn out drivel defending his actions by basically saying he is a sociopath so he doesn’t care. His process of thought and justifications have already been shown they don’t need to be expressed in every odd chapter.

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Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

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