This concept has so much potential

Yeah im checking out here. Went from really interesting to really bad in like 4 chapters. It’s like a completely different book.

This is a really good start (read 25 chapters) I wish the translation was a little better in places, but the world itself and the setup as so much potential. It is unique, and i look forward to seeing where it goes.

This is the worst novel I ha e read on here in years. Granted I have read 5 chapters, but I was ready to drop after chapter 2. No details No explanations Absurd logic The System is boring and broken in all the wrong ways. Chapter 1-2 progression of his skill is completely ridiculous. It may get better later, may not, but right now, this is this worst. Read the first two chapters and then come back.

This is so bad so far. He goes from 3 years of failing 1000 times to making a sword of superior stage 2 On his first try in 4 days? Like even with a system thats absurd.

Great start

A review up to chapter 40. So take everything with a grain of salt. Pro’s: Great characters and dialogue Fight scenes are well written I laughed so hard a number of times. Story moves at great pace. Continuously discover more about the MC over time. Con’s: The Cultivation System in my opinion is not very good. Having 3 seperate levels for each part of your cultivation makes it harder to understand where exactly each character is in the power structure. And harder to remember the ordering of the power levels for each one. (Generic for no spoilers) The MC’s special thing, while unique, is too strong. There’s less tension in a lot of cases than there should be. Doesn’t feel like he earns it. Skills are too easy to learn. I could be wrong but it felt like to me every character who reads a book learns skills instantly if they are at the appropriate power level. Conclusion: 4.6 stars If your looking for a novel with good character development, comedy, and dialouge, this will be great for you. If you focus more on systems, power scaling, etc, then you probably won’t like it.

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One of the best novels on here. Rapidly paced with enough detail to immerse you in whats happening. Cannot recommend it enough, and i am eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Its great, I wish it kept going passed 60. I like the way the systems are implemented and the world around the mc is very realistic. Highly recommend you give it a shot.

I didn’t make it that far. But holy crap, the start of the novel despite being “edited” is barely readable. I’ve read atleast 100+ light novels, tens of thousands of chapters, and i’ve never seen flow this bad. There’s no flow at all. None. Maybe it gets better, but i’ll never find out. Concept itself seems fine to me. Needs another edit, if that’s edited, I can’t imagine how bad the original was.

Holy crap, the flow is awful lol. Content is fine, but its so painful to read.