Review Detail of TheLastBastion in Monster Integration

I didn’t make it that far. But holy crap, the start of the novel despite being “edited” is barely readable. I’ve read atleast 100+ light novels, tens of thousands of chapters, and i’ve never seen flow this bad. There’s no flow at all. None. Maybe it gets better, but i’ll never find out. Concept itself seems fine to me. Needs another edit, if that’s edited, I can’t imagine how bad the original was.