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Just found this. Seems like a really interesting, low-drama story. The only downside is that the FL is 15, and the MC is 15/30, depending on how you count, which feels weird. But the other relationships are fine, and the MC seems to be responsible and mature.

Ummm... did something get cut from the middle of this chapter? Also since when was that relationship “fragile”?

That gif is perfect 👌

Another chapter?!?! Woohoo!!! Thanks!

What is this? A mass release? Please, by all means, continue!

Will Joshua bring the “constant sale” business model to his new world?

Welp, once that spreads the reputation of the church should take a nosedive, at least in Norland.

Yeah, the Inquisition Leader will probably kill Messai before they go through the portal, to expedite the trial process. Claim there was no time for a full trial in the battlefield or something. Better than letting word of the Inquisitors weird actions get out.

It’s not the church, exactly. It’s the Cthulhu-esk monster that the Inquisitors get power from.