WyattJaymes54

Very interesting read. This is a really unique sci-fi read

Sounds like a horror version of star trek

Very easy and interesting to read

this is a very good story. however you have problems with missing words in sentences. I suggest reading the sentences out loud to yourself and adding the words that flow into the sentence. Other than that this is a great read. you have exceptional talent. Your characters are really well developed. I really enjoyed reading this. I can't wait to see more from you.

You have a good story here. The only problem here is that you have so many misspellings and grammar issues that it's messing with the flow of the story. All in all, this is a great book. It has a good writing style and it is a good idea. Keep writing! I can't wait to see more from you!!!

This is a good story. The idea is there. The only problem is the flow of the sentences. You have a good writing style. But you need to read the sentences out loud to yourself cuz you're having problems with words need to be added into the sentence or words being in the wrong spot. Other than that it was a good read. keep writing. Can't wait to see an update for the story!!

This story is amazing. The worldbuilding is amazing. The sentences seem to make sense and leave me wanting more. The storyline is good but it lacks emotion. All in all, a good read. I definitely recommend this story to all fantasy lovers

I love this piece!

This is my first time reading a fan fic, So bare with me. I absolutely loved the storyline and how you gave Issac a second chance. You don't give a reason why he was hospitalized though which is key to to the story and his redemption and why the judge saw that he deserved a second chance even if it is in a villain's body. Otherwise this story has great potential and I enjoyed reading it

This is very good. The world you crafted quite good. This is a great book and has good potential. I can't wait to read more. But one thing I would like to know is why Issac has been hospitalized all his life. His he physically/mentally ill? What are his thoughts behind being in this predicament?