Th3extra_7

I'l just say what's on my mind, kinda heavily complanning. I'm not gonna stop reading it or anything but I want to say it anyway. To be honest, I'm disappointed. The story was good until this point. Too much righteousness is just as bad as too much evil for me. Worst of all, it feels like a forced plot. He is betting everything for a stranger and for so called 'justice' and it bothers me. It bothers me because his life is not safe at all before, and this will make it worst. It bothers me because he is biologically 7/8 years old and is doing this for ideals. It bothers me because their interactions (mc and the kid) were described as 'annoying', 'troublesome' and it ended with danger to mc's freedom by simply being a bystander. It bothers me that it is happening again. It most certainly bothers me because whatever happens from here on out was the mc's own choice. Ironically, it bothers me because it breaks my immersion in the story, since it makes the mc feel artificial, just like a character in a book. I guess what it comes down to is: it bothers me because I can't relate. Anyway I wanted to say it.

sometimes this novel makes me lose sleep, like right now

bruh thats a brilliant metaphor

for anyone wondering, it's chapter 250 or so when things start going downhill as this friend said(about the foundation and whatever happens after). I must say that I really enjoyed the story until then! It's similar to Immortal in the Magic World until that point. Note: its similar but the mc of this story and from IMW have different personalities and different starts, and thus different persperctives...