Goddess of beauty form it's wrong place And Goddess of wisdom from Godslayer is also a good option if mc going to avatar world could be a short spiritual journey For his character development like even if he wants to destroy the Ninja World he shouldn't treat himself that badly After all revenge should be not about making yourself miserable I think fairy tale would be able to fill the Trust issue There is also a cordless in Naruto world but I plan for her to start as a week person atleast for first few years

for kin maker half maid and half Ninja but haven't found the solid reason

the system is more about giving in opportunity what he previously lack for kin for short time I am going to ignore then start developing her I already know that I am not that great of water who can't handle multiple characters in same time such better to give time to allow to character at one time what's the first year ends I am thinking in two direction one is he could go back to in Naruto world and bring more characters or he could go to new world and bring new characters

I plan to find him a goddess who could help him form it's wrong to pick up girls in dungeon they are lots of goddess. get him some like minded peoples who wants to become strong or have some similar intentions for learning magic I would say black magic is best for his revenge and I plan him to learn lots of magic which would be useful now I am going to start let him build his reputation let him start teaching others

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The character's flaws allowed me to develop over 30 chapters, whereas my other novels didn't surpass 10. However, the main issue is his overwhelmingly negative nature; had I been born into the Uchiha if I was born in Uchiha I would end this little lifeHe never takes back his belongings or tries to restore the Uchiha. Sometimes, I even feel like he is in control. One thing I may have failed to clarify is that Character I have created Don't have many memories of his previous life, but they are not numerous.

I will do when the time is comes let's first finish Harry Potter world

it's hard to say at this point but little bit of black bullet and it's wrong to pick up girls in dungeon but if somebody suggest the plot my add his suggestion in world currently I don't even know if I am writing right or wrong speed is also going to be dropped due to going to the doctor

it's a good room for doing some normal research and practice it's really weird I didn't thought since I do remember the room

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if there is something wrong I could fix

I did compare 7th and 6th and that was the only chapter where dialogues where mostly arranged by GPT currently I am using AI to add write punctuations grammar or to confirm some details for original I don't use for dialogue creation because it waste too much time is most of its dialogue or very wrong since AI has a habit of removing the stuff and trying to have lots of positive Vibes if have any problems you could comment I would change them for the current problem of dialogues I would sayif I could treat everyone like a system I would able to write correct dialogues and interactions

if you are talking about the difference between 5th chapter and 6th chapter I would say after writing down the dialogues and the chapter I ask the chat GP to make it better

I hope you could properly explain me if there is any problem I will try to fix it and hope you could at least give me some example which chapters are you talking

I don't have anyone I can let them read them for myself I would say as author I have a blind spot I did catch mistake after posting if I listen to the chapter but it's not accurate for AI canced just okay

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A very spot on review when writing the problem is each chapter is not written in same times most of my writing is about write a 1 paragraph and leave it there it's mostly about write lots of paragraphs and line then stitch them together to make a chapter and I do plan to fix But I'm also afraid because when writing my previous novel when I go back to patch up some starting chapters I end up giving up Mostly I feel little scared if my new changes will be liked by people or not but on the other hand they aren't many people who is reading this book so what I'm going to do is first to stabilise the story then go back on first chapter and route down more details and fix all the chapters according to my understanding

currently I don't have any general outline or I know what I am writing for Hermione Granger she is not that useful since MC isn't a good guy kin is more like a helper not at trustable person currently my hope is I just to don't drop the story since it's easier to start a new novel then fix the problem of this novel

😭 well I can understand I would say my English is mostly patch up English since my education is incomplete . I had zero friends so I really have no communication skills or how people start a conversation so this is original novel and it's bad because of my bad English and communication skills .

Thank you There is a too many things to write at same time which creating a conflict Plus my personal emotions got involved which made mc quite unstable but luckily for this story it's a good thing since i can fix along while writing his character I Going to kiss you so I can get 100 points to the point where is kissing just for kissing As long as my health can keep up I can continue of course if there is no response I might have to stop So your reply was like I can still write 5 chapters till I get the next comment