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originally I like writing chapter around 500 words currently I am working on around 1000 and planning to push for 1500

that's the problem with the Marvel as long as they got any technology belongs to him they can copy with iron Man the situation more terrible the guy can literally unable to make butter armour that's a scary thought and for my MC his system isn't good enough to keep up

that's remind me in the two concept I have his one is priest you not typical priest in war hammer living comfortable doing 18 + stuff with battle sisters the second days standard person downloading space Marine for first time and getting blood Angels DLC probably pirated got telepated for the world I haven't decided where he will be but I do have the basic idea

you can stay connected while I do have two concepts but the better ones are always welcome second one could have focus one or two chapter weekly

I will do at once this one becomes more stable and if you want a link for this type of books I do know a website where around 50 to books available but they are in Chinese so you would need a decent browser with translation plus decent security

it's all about relationship he providing them shelter I am a decent weapon plus what she wants is a divine weapon

no

and thanks for reminding for the mistake

now I am reading it again I think I'm going to pick another thing where she put knuckles to her chin that expressions of good I think I should keep it for another paragraph

"You're right," she said. "It is hard to walk away." Her gaze met his, unwavering. "Not because of the power. Not the machines. And not because of fear." She rested her elbow on the table, propping her chin against her knuckles. "But because, deep down, I think people want to believe in you. Even when you don’t believe in them." this is example you know I don't even understand what is she saying separately this dialogue looks good but in the chapter its terrible what I do is to take the body language and the expressions and replace the rest of them in this paragraph only thing I took was she said