that's going to be hard this would be the second novel I am writing and writing to novels in same time it's mean I will have less chapters the response of both novel is poor which is the least encouraging thing about both book 🧐

so my honest thought as a author is first chapters are little out of place then there is a story control where I have to self consciously remove the 18 + content story had a journal direction which is the most basic go to different world get strong come back take revenge and start a new life go around finding girls sometimes I forget when writing he is not the original character but my own depression plus his own desire to take revenge create his personality which is much closer to the original which I plan to change but not in one or two chapters for it might not even be visible in starting chapters are around less than 500 which I had increase by 200 and I will keep trying to improve as long as you guys keep giving me suggestions which are revelant to the novel

his magic is already too much to learn plus book of magic also had all the magic it's mean it also has magic about strengthening yourself I feel like his every artifact of Dr faith can make a level or top superhero in next chapter I am going to put the list of some of these are artefact and if definitely will go to DC and marvel mha world is going to be like a taking a vacation or level 1 village for new b and directly throwing him into Marvel is also a stupid idea since he doesn't have a God inside him its mean he isn't that strong I really don't know if it was a good idea to write two novels together since there is always a limit how many chapters I can put in one week

they are going to be a fight with some dark wizard it should give you some examples about power level

no I know it's a game and I see some AMV and a one FanFiction even it wasn't about World of Warcraft

😭😭 thanks

I am not changing the character I am talking about going after her mother the only place I plan to change his character is how he treats girls even so this is going to be a very long time currently he is just doing for points

okay I just finished one more but I have to say 4 chapters should be my limit for a week I have to say this novel might not be lucky with getting more views but at least compared to my other novels time posting mor chapters

story is in initial stages to be fair I am not spending too much time on this one probably one or two chapters every week I have another novel where I am taking out around 4 chapters of week and for this novel description I'm really bad with that after 6 month I have finally able to get a description for my man novel this one was created because I was little angry when I ask what would be a better story iron man in MHA or doctor faith in MHA then I got ban from the server

that remind me to try my second novel if you want it's main character isn't about revenge so I am just waiting casually it's Doctor Fate in MHA

both want revenge it's also a great way to change his character and saving some cute girls always at last point for Hermione grangers are views will also change after seeing that stupid world and see my at least make some plans for im

yp if you want to pick up a girls this is the best place for him since he just need to stop them for growing and give it them healing and helping someone to get Revenge I think it would be a nice change

just for numbers I plan to get from werewolf girls and some girls form black bullet army of little girl sounds cute

yp it will depend on their chemistry at least I have to wait for 3rd year for her to grow little feelings she can be someone who could stop him for doing stupid things like stopping his plan to destroy the village let's say he have a book of seal he can cast a magic which can kept the secret and make everyone forget about every Ninja to recorded there that would be a perfect revenge for stealing Ninja technique of his clan

you can share your suggestions

I hope you would continue story if you have suggestions

since Harry Potter world have same rules as our world I'm using the same reaction someone could join you for some money or some benefit making fall in love it's depend on mcs on character and how much effort he puts

thank you for the great review why I would like to know if you could tell me about the latest chapter since the writing style has been little bit modified and the speed was also increase when writing them

it's hard for me to identify most of problems you know in first chapter for 6th month didn't even know there was a line which were two times said in first chapter most of my story get destroyed don't know if my quality chapter is increasing or decreasing the only problem I can identify is dialogue examples, MC said while frowning, MC side smiling I am also working on 2 new novels using the experience of this novel

the reason is clear first is his age it's only 14 year old first chapter did clear his training very hard but he was also worried one attacking of Naruto to unlocking ninetale mode and learning sage mode so he attack early age of 14 but Naruto still able to learn them due to the stage of six path, and he has not that stupid he had his Kaleidoscope ability is to control time and reality manipulation mirchi always safe for final fight as a backup, I know I didn't explain in early chapter lots of thing very clearly but when he goes back from Harry Potter world and other world's I do plan to give little glams office thoughts and journey writing might be bad but when I write his character I did prepare lots reasoning for every action