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Good concept i like how u progress story. However the order of words in some areas seems abit unussual. Abit rough arouns the edges so to speak. But if u sort that out and continue with that u doing, it will be great.
Sasuke: in Comprehensive World
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I don't have anyone I can let them read them for myself I would say as author I have a blind spot I did catch mistake after posting if I listen to the chapter but it's not accurate for AI canced just okay
ninja_0756:even if you dont go back and fix old chapters just re read what u have written before posting. if you can get someone else to reread for u. they might catch mistakes you missed and help with syntax issue.
A very spot on review when writing the problem is each chapter is not written in same times most of my writing is about write a 1 paragraph and leave it there it's mostly about write lots of paragraphs and line then stitch them together to make a chapter and I do plan to fix But I'm also afraid because when writing my previous novel when I go back to patch up some starting chapters I end up giving up Mostly I feel little scared if my new changes will be liked by people or not but on the other hand they aren't many people who is reading this book so what I'm going to do is first to stabilise the story then go back on first chapter and route down more details and fix all the chapters according to my understanding
even if you dont go back and fix old chapters just re read what u have written before posting. if you can get someone else to reread for u. they might catch mistakes you missed and help with syntax issue.
DV_5559:A very spot on review when writing the problem is each chapter is not written in same times most of my writing is about write a 1 paragraph and leave it there it's mostly about write lots of paragraphs and line then stitch them together to make a chapter and I do plan to fix But I'm also afraid because when writing my previous novel when I go back to patch up some starting chapters I end up giving up Mostly I feel little scared if my new changes will be liked by people or not but on the other hand they aren't many people who is reading this book so what I'm going to do is first to stabilise the story then go back on first chapter and route down more details and fix all the chapters according to my understanding
DV_5559:A very spot on review when writing the problem is each chapter is not written in same times most of my writing is about write a 1 paragraph and leave it there it's mostly about write lots of paragraphs and line then stitch them together to make a chapter and I do plan to fix But I'm also afraid because when writing my previous novel when I go back to patch up some starting chapters I end up giving up Mostly I feel little scared if my new changes will be liked by people or not but on the other hand they aren't many people who is reading this book so what I'm going to do is first to stabilise the story then go back on first chapter and route down more details and fix all the chapters according to my understanding
it's hard for me to identify most of problems you know in first chapter for 6th month didn't even know there was a line which were two times said in first chapter most of my story get destroyed don't know if my quality chapter is increasing or decreasing the only problem I can identify is dialogue examples, MC said while frowning, MC side smiling I am also working on 2 new novels using the experience of this novel
DV_5559:A very spot on review when writing the problem is each chapter is not written in same times most of my writing is about write a 1 paragraph and leave it there it's mostly about write lots of paragraphs and line then stitch them together to make a chapter and I do plan to fix But I'm also afraid because when writing my previous novel when I go back to patch up some starting chapters I end up giving up Mostly I feel little scared if my new changes will be liked by people or not but on the other hand they aren't many people who is reading this book so what I'm going to do is first to stabilise the story then go back on first chapter and route down more details and fix all the chapters according to my understanding