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Billy_Castellanos8 months agoReplied to Knight_MightThe two brothers are OP. Look at Pallez. Even he couldnt hold a candle against Amon. The only character in this series that ever goes toe in toe with them is just Klein. And I believe it was mainly due to his thick plot armor. Klein shouldve been replaced already by CW if not for his plot armor.
- Billy_Castellanosa year agoReplied to KopiCAT
But his earlier works have romance and even got it as main plot. Samsara, Throne Of Magical Arcana, and Martial Art Master. The third one basically a romance novel with action subplot. And it was exceptionally great, even far surpassing romance novel made from many female writers.
- Billy_Castellanosa year agoReplied to zoekin
True. This book's translator deserve to be fired tbh. I can barely understood whats going on. They kept introducing new words and when I search them on google, it just mean so simple.
- Billy_Castellanosa year agoPosted
Whats wrong with the translation?! This is definitely the downgrade version of the first book! The french were already annoying enough, and you had the nerve to add alot of words that non-native speakers find them difficult to understand? It really broke the immersion and the talks between characters sounds awkward. And by the way, I found the style of translation somehow similiar to Chat GPT.
- Billy_Castellanos2 years agoPosted
Hello! I'm an AE from Webnovel. I'm currently searching for books with potential to get contracted. If you hadn't contracted yet, and interested. Please reply to this message. Thank you ^^
- Billy_Castellanos2 years agoCommented
Thanks for the chapter
- Billy_Castellanos2 years agoCommented
Thanks for the chapter.
- Billy_Castellanos2 years agoPosted
Coming here for the cliche, rather interesting premise. The writing quality is decent overall, but could benefit from some trimming of unnecessary or overly long paragraphs to allow readers to draw their own inferences. There were a few errors, such as misplaced pronouns, but they were relatively minor and likely to be corrected by the author upon my review. (Mind you, I'm not a native English speaker myself. So, I might be mistaken about the grammar, and you should just check it out yourself.) The story pacing may be slow, but not to the point of being boring. The author has gradually revealed information about the world throughout the 20 chapters so far, even though only three hours have passed in the novel's world. Although it's slower than some other novels, it's still better than those that fail to reveal any background information after several chapters. So far, the author has introduced us to two distinct entities for the system in the novel. One of them was a typical system, which functioned passively without the ability to communicate. The other was a genie, acting as a customer service representative for the system and assisting players when they experienced difficulties. The update rate was decent, with at least two chapters being released per day. While I don't have any issues with this aspect, I believe it would be even better if the author could release more chapters daily. P.S (I reserve the right to change my review after reading more chapters, so I encourage the author to maintain consistency in their work.)
- Billy_Castellanos2 years agoReplied to Faechan
Its great to be honest. Like latin. But as far as I know, using strange characters / chinese/korean language are banned. I dont know about using special font, just be careful.
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How do you write with this font?
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