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The elf from black clover who can summon hundreds of swords would be a good power for dealing with armies and you could make it that when he uses his power he gets the effect yuno gets when he powers up
Now this is good
You could also use huff
I cant speak or read your language but i read villano and I instantly understood what you were saying.
Im crying
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I agree. it doesnt sound realistic how the characters are talking
Back in ww1 and ww2 sometime soldiers werent trained properly. they were told how to shoot the guns and obey orders.
This one sounds super unique and interesting.
People are dumb
I agree with you author, people dont know how to enjoy a story they want everything told to them right away and dont like letting a climax build up for the story.