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I'm only at chapter 8 but, I couldn't stop myself from reviewing this boook. 1. Writing is good. I won't say excellent because it doesn't pass that category. But it doesn't you are not gonna get better at it. You can do really well with few more writings. 2. I love how you created a such a different FL. I mean whenever you read a story, FL is always beautiful extra ordinary nd if she is hated, she is still beautiful this and that. And if it's a obese FL, she always looses weight and becomes a very attractive woman who's followed by every hot/popular guy in the town / world or whatever. But the FL in this story is very beautiful, at least this is what I think. She doesn't not have a perfect body but u described her characteristics. She has a sweet , soft and loving voice . She is caring and hard working, kind and respectful. And lastly she's not a busybody. I haven't finished the whole book so I can't say anything more. I hope that i was able to express my feelings thorough this.
At first, I really enjoyed reading this. it was definitely different from other stories and I really liked that but it got kind of uncomfortable in later chapters, actually, it became kind of similar to the obvious plotđ. the beginning was really fun to read and funny; then it got dark. Little too dark actually ( or maybe it's just me who found it to be dark) after this it kind of became similar to the rest of the sort of obvious plot. it kind of felt a little bit rushed. the ending was satisfactory. tell you the truth, I believe you can write great stories. you got a creative mind. so keep up the hard work.
Read this story on your own risk, it's not a sweet romance if you are looking forward to it. . . At first it sounded like a sweet romance story but turned out that it's actually dark and has shown human flaws. In my opinion it's also somewhat disturbing but I think author described it well. Let's be honest , in our modern age we have a lot of problems with marriages. Some times is a couple who ruins their marriage and other times there are other people who ruines other people marriages . I think this story in a way describe such situations well. I have an idea how it will end. But I must say author is very brave to write thisđ don't get me wrong, I think u need courage to write such situations . All I would like to say at the end , if you wanna read this one you need to have an open mind to accept any type of situation. Like i said , read it in your own risk.
Honestly I kind of feel bad for Nia. I mean is true that she's hurting a lot of people ; she is not greedy for power and only wants to be free from this disgusting situation. Let's be honest here, he is not just a brother but a twinđ¤˘. I might have done, the same if i were in her place. She doesn't even has the freedom to love and above that, Aku is possessive. And if Nia were to be honest with him about her feelings, I believe she would have been chained by now and would be assaulted again and again.
All I want to say is, how come I never noticed this Author before? not gonna lie, I have only checked 3 stories from this author so far and loved all 3 of them. I haven't finished reading them but I can tell, I'm gonna love em very much. in other words, totally recommended. really, wonderful job sweet author. keep up the good work [img=recommend]