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Lv42yr

I'm only at chapter 8 but, I couldn't stop myself from reviewing this boook. 1. Writing is good. I won't say excellent because it doesn't pass that category. But it doesn't you are not gonna get better at it. You can do really well with few more writings. 2. I love how you created a such a different FL. I mean whenever you read a story, FL is always beautiful extra ordinary nd if she is hated, she is still beautiful this and that. And if it's a obese FL, she always looses weight and becomes a very attractive woman who's followed by every hot/popular guy in the town / world or whatever. But the FL in this story is very beautiful, at least this is what I think. She doesn't not have a perfect body but u described her characteristics. She has a sweet , soft and loving voice . She is caring and hard working, kind and respectful. And lastly she's not a busybody. I haven't finished the whole book so I can't say anything more. I hope that i was able to express my feelings thorough this.

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The Criminal Who Stole My Heart

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thank you so much I really appreciate it