At first, I really enjoyed reading this. it was definitely different from other stories and I really liked that but it got kind of uncomfortable in later chapters, actually, it became kind of similar to the obvious plotđ. the beginning was really fun to read and funny; then it got dark. Little too dark actually ( or maybe it's just me who found it to be dark) after this it kind of became similar to the rest of the sort of obvious plot. it kind of felt a little bit rushed. the ending was satisfactory. tell you the truth, I believe you can write great stories. you got a creative mind. so keep up the hard work.
Norah_Koch
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