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The world background is, well you don't know anything really important like if it's a continent or anything, the story was was very good until the labyrinth arc where it just got boring, nothing happened and the creature just pop out of nowhere with superpower. This arc just ruin everything that was good about this novel, it's just so boring, even action scene make me want to sleep. I love the duo character, even tough Shining duo's one was a bit better, writing quality is good and and i don't really care about stability of update, anyway i hope you can continue to improve yourself and to try to re lit up the flame of passion you had while writing Shining duo as it's currently a lot better than this novel.
I also have to thank because you made me reread my chapter and it's full of mistake
Don't worry i don't know what i write but i do but now i have a reason and it will explicate in later chapter it's about his bloodline etc
I am sorry you didn't understand, but it was more dense in a way to say thing he has no tact he is dense and rough in the way he say thing
Garen come from a video game named League of Legend or LOL or it's catch phrase if you can say is DEMACIAAAAAAAAA
thanks !
haha !
finally someone commented about that ! haha !