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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai028d
    Commented

    When are the chapters ??

    Ch 29 Chapter 28 - War
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    The 8th continent
    War&Military · SaphiR
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai029d
    Commented

    at what hour does the chapter are released ?

    Ch 29 Chapter 28 - War
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    The 8th continent
    War&Military · SaphiR
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Posted

    The world background is, well you don't know anything really important like if it's a continent or anything, the story was was very good until the labyrinth arc where it just got boring, nothing happened and the creature just pop out of nowhere with superpower. This arc just ruin everything that was good about this novel, it's just so boring, even action scene make me want to sleep. I love the duo character, even tough Shining duo's one was a bit better, writing quality is good and and i don't really care about stability of update, anyway i hope you can continue to improve yourself and to try to re lit up the flame of passion you had while writing Shining duo as it's currently a lot better than this novel.

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    Yin & Yang Pleasures of Cultivation
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Replied to Fahad501

    Thanks

    Ch 7 Aptitude and Love ( and lust )+18
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    Fight For Freedom
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Replied to Fahad501

    Yes she will I was not sure about it

    Ch 7 Aptitude and Love ( and lust )+18
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    Fight For Freedom
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Replied to Pewzz

    I also have to thank because you made me reread my chapter and it's full of mistake

    "Lucian...I am sorry...I was drunk, and you were there...While Garen was at the garrison...when i saw you...I-I don't know why...b-but I-I saw you as a man, then we had sex. Remember when you were...unconscious after fighting more than 10 kids because they insult your brother ?"
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
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    Don't worry i don't know what i write but i do but now i have a reason and it will explicate in later chapter it's about his bloodline etc

    "Lucian...I am sorry...I was drunk, and you were there...While Garen was at the garrison...when i saw you...I-I don't know why...b-but I-I saw you as a man, then we had sex. Remember when you were...unconscious after fighting more than 10 kids because they insult your brother ?"
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Replied to Pewzz

    I am sorry you didn't understand, but it was more dense in a way to say thing he has no tact he is dense and rough in the way he say thing

    In the meantime, Lucian was in his room, still dense until he heard his brother and girlfriend moan crazily.
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Replied to hysaky

    Garen come from a video game named League of Legend or LOL or it's catch phrase if you can say is DEMACIAAAAAAAAA

    Lucian was an orphan. His parents were one of the many unlucky people who succumbed to rare sickness. All this time the only reason he survived was because of his mother's younger brother, Garen.
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Commented

    What did you expect dis tou expect reader to acclaim you for such a dumb and idiot choixe ?

    Ch 73 CH. 73: The challenge
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    A Cliché Multiverse story
    Anime & Comics · GloriousHunter
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Replied to Dylan_Callahan

    you comment something i wrote 7 month ago lol

    Ch 467 Inheritance Trials
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    Spirit Cultivation
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Commented

    thanks !

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    Dragon Incarnation
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Replied to tekite

    I swear the more i read the more i am desperate about humanity.

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    What do you mean my cute disciples are Yanderes?
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Replied to TheOnlyZaneHaisel

    haha !

    Lucian was an orphan. His parents were one of the many unlucky people who succumbed to rare sickness. All this time the only reason he survived was because of his mother's younger brother, Garen.
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    Fight For Freedom
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Replied to TheOnlyZaneHaisel

    finally someone commented about that ! haha !

    "Little brother, take care of Lilia and her child. Be the father i will not be..."
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Replied to 0Akai0

    You can research all the character on internet btw.

    Ch 5 Sentiment & Military
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    Fight For Freedom
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Replied to 0Akai0

    Armin

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    Fight For Freedom
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
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    Mikasa

    Ch 5 Sentiment & Military
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    Fight For Freedom
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Replied to 0Akai0

    this is Eren btw

    Ch 5 Sentiment & Military
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    Fight For Freedom
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  • 0Akai0
    0Akai02mth
    Replied to 0Akai0
    Ch 5 Sentiment & Military
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    Fight For Freedom
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