The premise of the story is interesting but the actual coolness of the codes system is lost due to the lack of codes and their usage. There are a ton of errors and some of the chapters are actually in the wrong order. The character has the potential to be great and this story amazing, but it seems like the author can’t stay on track with the characters goals.

This type of inconsistency is what brings the book down. It happens too often.

Amazing story. A few slow points here and there but still an amazing story. One annoying Thing is the author often uses the wrong name when referring To characters often mixing them up woth other characters.

The story is really good but the writing is terrible. Everything that happens is summed up right after it happens. There are also tons of grammatIcal errors which force you to read the sentence again. It also seems like the author forgets things about the character then later remembers and explains it off as something the character did that we didn’t see.

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Have loved this book since day 1. The characters are very well thought out and the story doesnt drag at all. One of the Most important thing to me is grammar and this Novel has no grammatical errors its always easy to read and understand, truly one of my favorites.

How Hard is it to edit the Chapters, and I cant understand how you mix up the names of characters. Editing likes this tells me its all about the stones as oppose to writing a good story

Such a great story absolutely one of my favorites

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The editing is sooo bad