The premise of the story is interesting but the actual coolness of the codes system is lost due to the lack of codes and their usage. There are a ton of errors and some of the chapters are actually in the wrong order. The character has the potential to be great and this story amazing, but it seems like the author can’t stay on track with the characters goals.
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