good read , I hope you don't leave this story and continue it , you are doing a better job at the tempo or the story the other novels of this type I've read. so keep the tempo, and say the story ;)

awsoem bravoo

You too .

Mr writer what Percy Jackson what you are talking about is legends of Olympus , not a Hollywood video .

and reported

bye nobody cares 😂

Mr. writer I think your last question and answer , should you revise it . it's not 1 chapter about beauties , true , but it's 1 2 chapters about the stupid cultivation retardness he learns , if you have magic , why not keep magic as a facto power for this story for the mc, I do not mind seeing a stupid jackie chan at god knows the name of his cultivation level , fighting mc and mc to kick his ass as bad as he can by casting 1 mil fireballs , not 1 mil palm of budhass . I liked your story I loved it then you turn it in .... exactly what me and 50% people out there hates. Revise your review and your story , you are goin into the pit of nothingness with this story.

use emp , even a 2 years old can do it given the tool 👌, but trained people can do it in few seconds given the tool. so it will be defeated in their lifetime. Writer I know you want to make mc look like a badass , and put the nanites up in the food chain , but do it right , a emp is like a instant death plague for them, unless you coat them with special materials, wich you didn't mention they are. and the creator of those nanites is not that big o deal btw , we can create nanites , humans have the theory behind it and the understanding so that doesn't makes us stupid or lower beeing's then other technological advances races, and don't forget we have potential as well. from single cell forms beeing's we were , we manage to control and edit single cells now.

because we don't have the tools doesn't makes us a backwater race btw

what's with you people that write novels and hiding total power behind some stupid nonsense, be frank help the humans as a human.

just draw a small nanobot replicator that eats matter and transform it to your wishes and he can get godlike , you gotta love science to do that

more please 😘

author let us know if you are alright at least or if you hiatsu this. be the better man , no one is judging here

isn't release that witch korean ?

this is as far as I go , nice novel but you had to add dumshet Chinese sects and realms and soul killers, jesus .

the review I wanted to make passed by my ears for now but I want to say a voupl of things in here , after reading 60+ chapters the story was wonderful beautiful but then it came chapter by chapter the Chinese slang story telling. Can you please tell me Mr. Writter why did you change the way you progressed with the story, why have clans and cultivation ? it was beautiful like 🎄 is when you were a child but you started writing like pretty much everyone does with cultivation novels. By the way internal cultivation is just crap, there's no power coming from it , and also there is something more powerful then lightning ⚡ which is Light , you can make lasers from it just so you know, and from the stuff the main character learns you choose to give lightning spotlight which is just crap. Footwork is not as powerful as teleportation or the speed of lightning and light no matter what you do. light is a constant no matter how fast you go, you cannot bypass it and so it's lightning. that was just my rant and something personally I don't like, not much of a review since is personal and not biased opinion, but I loved the first chapters, while I'm reading it I hope it goes better and not into Chinese novels ways of writing. this is my first review and don't smack me readers and Mr. writter.

give us some more chapters mr writter

moooarrrr please re me writter , get mooaar

Mr writter its just a rover, stop saying its a monster. Just a rover dude, the way you are saying it is like a ant looking at a boot. Dony do it like that its bat you ca say thats a nice rover, thats a very high tech rover etc then thats a monster.

Read it, its not about individual power but development, but after hundreds of chapters you will find the mc getting something, can't tell you what it is but its definitely worth it reading up till then and afterwards.