the review I wanted to make passed by my ears for now but I want to say a voupl of things in here , after reading 60+ chapters the story was wonderful beautiful but then it came chapter by chapter the Chinese slang story telling. Can you please tell me Mr. Writter why did you change the way you progressed with the story, why have clans and cultivation ? it was beautiful like 🎄 is when you were a child but you started writing like pretty much everyone does with cultivation novels. By the way internal cultivation is just crap, there's no power coming from it , and also there is something more powerful then lightning ⚡ which is Light , you can make lasers from it just so you know, and from the stuff the main character learns you choose to give lightning spotlight which is just crap. Footwork is not as powerful as teleportation or the speed of lightning and light no matter what you do. light is a constant no matter how fast you go, you cannot bypass it and so it's lightning. that was just my rant and something personally I don't like, not much of a review since is personal and not biased opinion, but I loved the first chapters, while I'm reading it I hope it goes better and not into Chinese novels ways of writing. this is my first review and don't smack me readers and Mr. writter.
TheCrow
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