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Your not making any sense.
this is essence of Gacha not stats
this is so satisfying for me. There are so many HP fanfics where they just go, "I need basilisk venom or feindfyre to destroy the horcrux". They use it as a lame excuse to keep it around to cause trouble later.
this is actually really busted. he is breaking the laws of thermodynamics
This is a really solid Harry Potter story. The world is more expanded upon than most other fanfics, and there is an actual world outside of the protagonist. The only real critique I have as of chapter 25 is that dialog between characters and their thoughts feel unnatural. Oftentimes, the same phrases will be repeated the same way. e.g, when Harry talks to the administrators who will decide his future education, they all say the exact same phrases when talking about him. Ramble Underneath I don't really care if authors use AI to help them write, but it can sometimes lead to a limited vocabulary(it might not be AI, and the author could just struggle with convincing dialog). A lot of AI stories use a higher level of vocabulary but don't apply it correctly and ends up making dialog too rigid
so the author in the story made a clone of btth
Why lie and say he just now gained these abilities? He really doesn't need to. If you are going to have an op mc, it's better for him to show his strength and not have to tip toe around revealing it.
1. I think it would be weird to have more partners. you explained that he and raven have a "connection". will he also have this connection to other girls? if not then it is kind of unfair to them.
batman is talking like an mcu character
I swear I saw one fanfic use the word enigmatic a couple months ago. Now everybody is overusing it
don't worry too much about it. write wehenever you have good ideas, we can wait.