thanks for the review ! unfortunately , the mc is not really "evil" for now as he still needs to grow. As for the chapters , i'm quite busy at the moment but i should have more time soon , at first i wanted to do 2 chapters per day but unfortunately , idid not have the time

don't worry , i started to write here to get Criticism , the story is not updated atm because i don't have much time , still i'm trying to write when i can .

They know he is training , i think in the last chapter i said that he was slacking off because his mother wasn't there and he only trains in his lessons , after that he does nothing , that's why he could go steal a panty in his sister room as she was still training while he was doing nothing. As for if they're raising a child or a soldier , i would say that they see him as a soldier first without spoiling much. It's another world logic , where fighting and death is common . You should also never forget that my writing may just be bad 👀. I will do the following chapters in a package , so that the readers will have the complete developpement and there won't be frustation like there is on this one . If it's still bad after that , the problem is probably me . Anyway thanks for the feedback !

i think next chapter shall clear your confusion.

5

after 3 years

he can. the mother doesn't want him to be

indeed, he is . you should read what i answered to Badge Lucas_Sousa!

the mc is not like that because he is a child , he is perceived as a child by his family of course . you should read why i responded to Lucas_Sousa_7129 it may help you understand what i mean. thanks for the comment!

it's not about stats but something else

the sister does not learn magic, it's the mother that will force her as well

Nissa will have her development as well don't worry.

no it will happen soon

mc stole girls

most of the time i write something like "as i finished speaking" or things like that , but it's true that sometimes i don't, do you have any idea as to how i could add those breaks without repeating something like "when i finished speaking" or things like this?

yes , i don't think i will make her really important in the mc's harem but she will have other uses

To be honest , i was not too sure about those scenes and since they were not liked , i though about another way to use those characters and this way pleased me more which made me delete the 3 chapters. i don't know if you wanted me to keep those chapters, if you did , i hope you're not too dissapointed. Thanks for the "you' aren't a bad writer" , i really appreciate it !

Thanks for the feedback ! since all the reviews i got about this were negatives , i decided that i will take those chapters out of the story and have a different course of action for those characters.

right now no, having the mc watch is a bit boring , even when writing it i was bored . the chapter 11 is from the daughter Perspective but i will post an author though asking for people opinion about such chapters and depending of the results , it might never happen again or only one or two about the aftermath with the angels.

i will probably ask for opinions at the end of chapter 11 so just skip through it if you still want to read this story .